Walls

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I feel around frantically

a blind man touching the walls.

Trying to gleam meaning from the braille.

Cracked surface, each crack

scratching my splintered skin

doing little to irritate

the deep calluses.

Layers of skin built up so that

it doesn't hurt.

First poem, let me know if its good or not

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/82trz4/the_raging_storm/dvd3qsv/

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/82requ/young_boy_stricken_please_give_me_some_brutal/dvd39m5/

Posted Mar 8, 2018, 6:05 AM UTC · edited

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