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Man On Trial

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Man on trial, day by day

Each step further,

Carries him farther away

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It starts before he's ready

Too fast too soon,

He's abandoned already

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Through the second many scars

Endless beatings,

Will he end to join the stars?

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Man on trial, day by day

Each step further,

Carries him farther away

x

Through the third a man is born

Going farther,

By now he's got much to mourn

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On the fourth he nears his death

Too paralyzed,

Not yet giving up breath

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Man on trial, day by day

Each step further,

Carries him farther away

x

Five times a lifetime of pain

Such suffering,

By now there is all to gain

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Six demons want not to stop

A new hope his,

He found a gem he won't drop

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Man on trial, day by day

Each step further,

Carries him father away

x

Seven is heaven; a Dove

The sword is set,

The last is learning to love

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Posted Mar 15, 2018, 3:32 PM UTC · edited

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