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This is beautiful! I find it hard to show affection, but the way you use these comparisons has inspired me to try!

I really love the adoration shown in this poem, as well as how descriptive everything is. I could really picture everything described. 

Upvote because I'm jealous of your wife! I wish my bf was that romantic 

This is so sweet! You managed to make such a beautiful poem without the use of cliches which is very impressive in on itself. But those similes were on point. The flow felt natural without the feel that your were trying to add beauty to it.

Excellent job.

This is so sweet and heartfelt. Your choice of words is really great, it portrays your feelings for your wife really well. It’s easy to understand what you’re describing.

There is nothing more beautiful than you in all this world. The moonlit, starry, sky laden with heavenly diamonds set in silver; the earthly dawn glowing, radiant, touching upon new life and the new day; next to you these wonders are but shadows; cold frost upon an icy land. You are a Queen among women; gentle and kind as the leaves dancing in a warm summer wind yet strong and bold as a turbulent sea;  tempered as forged steel purposeful and just in a steady hand; edged with insight, discernment; held with love.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8613bx/comment/dw36mgz

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/866p44/metallic_dialect_of_a_dying_garden/

To My Wife