,I tire.,

,need to learn
 love to teach
  love to give
  need to reach.,

 know not where else to go
I know not what else to do
  how to survive 
	a sense of must
	;not how to live
	nor who to trust.,
	;


 I want for space

 a want for time
	.

;I tire at smiles of devils
	scorns of gods
 how do I live
 ?where is mine
,

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