[2,597] The Remaining (Completed short story)
So I had the urge to write a short story and wrote this yesterday.
What I would like from you:
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Was the world / setting confusing?
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Did the ending make sense?
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Did you like the ending? If so, why? If not, why?
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What do you think the point of the story is?
Other things are plot, setting, and just what you think about it. Not too worried about grammar/spelling. That can all be fixed later but I want to nail down the story first.
I guess I really want opinions on the ending and if / how / why I should change it.
I've made the link read-only because I would like most criticism focused on the story if possible but I do welcome any help on making things more refined mechanic-wise: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gP9kYBV2glOwRXC9bExwJ8c4IFWNUTRm7xaSNrFk6sI/edit?usp=sharing
Posted Mar 24, 2018, 8:14 AM UTC · edited