A Crow and a Robin
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Posted Mar 24, 2018, 5:03 PM UTC
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Posted Mar 24, 2018, 5:03 PM UTC
Hey,
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I like the contrast. Things that wouldn't usually be associated being brought together is something that appeals to me. Does it actually refer to a crow and robin? I like it because it can work whether the answer to that question is yes or no.
I really enjoyed it, Thank You, keep it up