Can you give me some honest feedback on this poem?

Stuck

I'm I at a crossroads or is this another rut?

Which way do I go?

I'm looking for advice that isn't completely mundane.

Does anyone know this road?

Or is this all crapshoot?

I'm not asking for a fucking GPS!!

Just a hint or a clue

Do I go into woods or up

To the mountains?

Why won't my legs move?

Why does it hurt to breathe?

I need to make a move but

I need assistance

I'll I'm asking for is help

I'm vulnerable

I just need a map

Not even a finished one

I get a life is about the journey

I just want to make sure I'm going

In the right direction

The truth is you're not sure either

I'm looking for a way to get unstuck

Just help me or hold my hand

So we can do this together

Help me draw a map

That is my life.

Posted Apr 3, 2018, 8:49 PM UTC · edited

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