Can you give me some honest feedback on this poem?
Stuck
I'm I at a crossroads or is this another rut?
Which way do I go?
I'm looking for advice that isn't completely mundane.
Does anyone know this road?
Or is this all crapshoot?
I'm not asking for a fucking GPS!!
Just a hint or a clue
Do I go into woods or up
To the mountains?
Why won't my legs move?
Why does it hurt to breathe?
I need to make a move but
I need assistance
I'll I'm asking for is help
I'm vulnerable
I just need a map
Not even a finished one
I get a life is about the journey
I just want to make sure I'm going
In the right direction
The truth is you're not sure either
I'm looking for a way to get unstuck
Just help me or hold my hand
So we can do this together
Help me draw a map
That is my life.
Posted Apr 3, 2018, 8:49 PM UTC · edited
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