only you and you can hear me

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70s ballads pouring over the walls

and your sliding socks against

drafts that rise from hardwood

floor, the oversized shadows of

the baggy flannel shirt ecstatic

haze of motion; my "...tiny dancer"

mouthing every word with the

exaggerated complexion of a

hallmark movie protagonist

and i just wanna pull you closer,

but how can i reach a star

pirouetting across my life,

outshining every false light

i counted on the highway,

now that it feels so real?

 

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