A dreamy landscape

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Scribbled down when travelling by train from Malaga to Barcelona. Six hours of olive trees but also green pastures and dry moon-like landscapes.


A vast open landscape
Colourful, dark, shiny
With great clouds
Hovering
Slowly transforming
And you want to run
Live in the countryside
Wake up at dawn
Listen to silence
Build a house
Keep five dogs
because with them
every time you go for a walk
it is an adventure

Be the center
See the sunlit mountains
Fill the void
Look around
Cry
Usurp the moment
Wait till something changes
Maybe a thunder in the distance
Maybe a passing of a bird
But no
Sometimes nothing happens
And all you can do is to accept


https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8c8bci/anxietys_fables/dxdfes4/

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Posted Apr 14, 2018, 10:17 PM UTC · edited

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