Rebirth

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In my state of weary consciousness I can see more clearly than I ever have before, Examining every detail right Down to every scratch and scuff on the floor. But there is a price, A price I’m willing to pay. My pain will be gone. But this is my last day.

In my state of weary consciousness Every sound is dull Merging together Hard to avoid Conversation is null Concentration is void

But what would concentration do? Force me to face the inevitable truth? So I say my goodbyes through teary eyes and apologise for lies told in the past in my vast labyrinth of life?

No! I will not concentrate! My mind has reached a near euphoric state and In my state of weary consciousness I AM the higher power! No god like me, at this ungodly hour.

Through the busy crowd I arise The reaper walking toward me Unseen by mortal eyes. He takes me by the hand and removes me from my life. Removes me from my memories Removes me from this pain This hell! Leaves the crowd staring down at a now vacant shell.

 In my state of death it’s dark and I’m alone. But this strange desolation has a feeling of .. Home I struggle and wriggle and manage to break free. Slowly open my eyes, there’s people looking at me. I’m scared and I panic, I begin to cry. Until this beautiful woman looks me right in the eye. Instantly I’m safe I’m loved and I’m warm. Life starts anew

I am reborn!

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