[Fates Storyhack] Conquest:GGG Chapter 20 Story Re-write

3DS StoryPatch

It has been revealed that King Garon is being slowly consumed by the cruel and malevolent entity Anankos. In a desperate attempt to free the King from this terrible state and restore him to the kind and just Father that he once was, Corrin has a plan. They'll get their Father to sit on the Hoshidan throne, which can restore one to their true form and mind. But it won't be easy! Such an action is tantamount to accepting subjugation, and the Hoshidan Royalty will not simply allow a hostile foreign army to take over their kingdom! After failing in their attempt at peace talks between the two nations, Corrin and company attempted to evade the Hoshidan army by passing through a den of Kitsune. These furry friends became decidedly unfriendly and, after attacking, were destroyed. A mournful Corrin shares their fear that they are leading the Nohrians into a similarly doomed mission, and Azura correctly surmises the terrible truth that Corrin sabotaged the peace talks on purpose! In trying to save their Father, has Corrin instead led their friends and family to their doom? Find out next!

In Chapter 20, after being consoled and encouraged by Azura, Corrin leads the Nohrian army in an attempt to cross through Wind Tribe territory. Fuga, the leader of the tribe, knows much--including the real reason behind the severing of trade between Hoshido and Nohr--the very cause of the war. The Wind Tribe Chief agrees to tell all...if Corrin can survive his assault!

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You can find all of the uploaded chapters here.

The Good Guy Garon storypatch is a story overhaul which seeks to address some of the narrative issues in Conquest, while also providing a new framework for it.

If you would prefer to play the new story yourself and have CFW and a modded 3ds, you can find the mod and instructions here: Conquest: Good Guy Garon Storyhack

Posted Apr 23, 2018, 5:48 PM UTC · edited

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AgahnimDOP•

I'm currently working on a Revelation storypatch, but I figured I'd take a break and upload the next chapter of Conquest:GGG!

It's interesting looking back on these Conquest chapters with the scripting knowledge I have now. There are a few things I'd do differently, such as adding more interaction on the battlefield and talk events between related/important characters. Maybe for Fates:Conquest:GGG:Ultimate Edition?

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Jk. I love your work. Really enjoy seeing the new script. Keep it up and I look forward to more good stuff.

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Amnotwhoyouthink•

I have to say, this chapter was a real highlight of the patch for me, it really gave some much needed gray morality on both ends.

That said, I imagine if this was how the game was actually written, people wouldn’t be too fond of receiving this info so far into it

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MrWaffles42•

I like your idea for the plague a lot. It makes it so that both sides of the war were simply doing what they felt they had to to keep their people safe, but also gives plausible reasoning for why each side can view the other's actions as unfair.

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DanteMGalileo•

Hey, IS? Yeah, there's this dude here who did your writing way better, can he be your new writer if you make Echoes of Fates 25 years from now?

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