I think, I thought wrongly

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First time writing poetry, it's incredibly vague but I hope you'll grasp it sort of, reddit :P

I thought

It would pass, until

The end

Time,

I had thought wrongly,

were how it would

pass, though

In truth I didn't

think

I thought wrongly

if I thought,

Living

will be how it

passes, I think.

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The theme I was going for was the mind of a narrator. The speaker has been going through an experience and had previously thought time would let them live, yet they've come to recognize that only living will do that.

Posted Apr 24, 2018, 1:38 AM UTC · edited

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