a little mystery

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satisfy me,
            summer breeze -
like a mystery,
try to open up to me

I wanna know the one what's wrong (that's me)
a little more

    a little less
a little more
    a little less

a little more
and put this mind at ease
(the one that wants to kick the floor
and slam the door
and treat love like a drifting scattered music;
the one that wants to smoke obsessively -
a little more
a little more)

- oh, I can roam around
and try to hide it
(all this mystery)

but satisfy me,
            crawl right through

and open up to me

    a little less
a little more


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Posted May 4, 2018, 12:35 PM UTC · edited

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