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The Little Baby Duckling

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A little baby duckling

Waddled down the road

He walked right down

To a nearby town

Where he met Fred the toad

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Fred said, hey little duckling, how's life going?

You've got to pay the toll

The duck said quack, I need a snack

And consumed Fred's lonely soul

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The duckling waddled off with a hack and a cough

And a click and a clack and a hiss

Came from a bush was a snake's tush

Whose hunger was bottomless

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The snake said, hey little duckling, you look delicious

With a smile that was brightly gleaming

The duck said crud, and drank her blood

Until she was a shell of a being

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The little baby duckling

Heard heaven's voices sing

The snake's blood was toxic

And he died from lead poisoning

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Posted May 4, 2018, 6:55 PM UTC

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