Predator

You're prey not predator
You're the reader not the editor
You'(we)re exposed when you killed her
I'm your doom not your saviour

I'm surprised what you dared utter
And The author would discredit you
And your life by the ten other
Judges - should be lawmakers

And now I see only red colour
you should hide 'fore i get to you
You were her husband and her future
I'm your downfall. I was her father


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