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hazyraindrops

I wrote this because I couldn't sleep. I haven't written poetry in 8 years.

Feedback Received!

Stream of consciousness & some stupid shit that might rhyme

Sitting uncomfortable, can't do much about it

Except stretch, that's the kinda pain that's supposed to help

Neurotransmitters lacking entirely my fault but am I addicted to deficits?

Is laying down with pointless issues really a prerequisite?

It feels good when someone wipes away your insecurities but that shit really is no good if that shit just keeps coming back

Look I'm sorry that you're with me right here and right now

But there's no other way to be with me than right here and right now

Couple hours ago we had our head in the clouds

But I think I maxed out so now it's time to come down

I've been trying to max out so that you'll keep me around

But I haven't really done that so maybe I should be out

I've been grinding extra hard to keep you up like some loud

But I haven't really done that so maybe I should be out

http://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8ibxvv/-/dyqv13i

http://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8i9gqa/-/dyqv2wr

Posted May 10, 2018, 9:00 AM UTC

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