enchanted night

enchanted night:
    a gentle bloom of design
in the enchanted sky, at night,
    (in time, that night)
told me some secrets -
    back then, I could see it
so vivid: all the magic of
the musical, unusual,
and beautiful exhibits in the night
(man, I wish
I could stop time)

but real life is a moment (too
gentle to restrain

a dream
a dream
a dream

so true
it could make you insane

- enchanted night: enchanted, I
don't wanna say goodbye,
so I'll just say
    good night
(and wake up to a gentle, sunny sky)

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