Come lie with me

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Come lie at my side in the dark.

In the fresh, soft grass of springtime.

Inhale deep the sweet, decaying scents.

A warm breeze blows and my mind drifts away.

I'm taken back to a place without a care.

You're sleeping in my arms while I whisper dreams of our future in your ear.

Waves crash onto the shore and a candle in the window flickers.

My mind snaps back and I feel the cold shock of reality.

And now I lie alone.

https://old.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8iqum4/decided_to_write_poem_instead_of_a_story/dyvmiad/

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Posted May 14, 2018, 8:38 PM UTC · edited

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