Soft Gold Flesh (Feedback/critique?)

There is an ecstasy

to be found

under the blushing cheek

of a fresh mango.

Juice and sugar trickle

like ambrosia down

the corners of my chin

as I bite into

the soft gold flesh

of this full and ripened

heart of hearts.

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