Short 'instapoetry' is my favorite. I'm a fan the plea for coexistence, even when focused on your own life.

please be honest, i'd love to hear your thoughts on this one (even though i'm very nervous)

Hey,

I'm taking your poem down because you haven't included two links to recent feedback, or because some of the feedback you've included isn't high-effort. If you're confused as to what that means, check the [rules](https://www.reddit.com/r/ocpoetry/wiki/rules) and the [feedback guide](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/wiki/feedbackcritiques). Message me when you change the feedback and I'll put your poem back up. And of course, you can always post in the [Sharethreads](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/search?q=Sharethread&sort=new&restrict_sr=on&t=week) without posting feedback. 

Cheers,  
Dog the Mod

a (modern) poem