Reflection

I see my reflection, it looks back and cries
I ask it what's wrong, it looks back and dies

I look in the mirror, it's empty and hollow
I ponder a moment, step back and swallow

I dive in headfirst, it's lonely and cold
I turn around and, my eyes behold

I start to cry, my tears begin streaming
I see myself withered and dreaming

I ask myself what's wrong, and I can only cry
Then I fall down and die.

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