Tan

Feedback Received!

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There’s not enough tan
In my face 
To inquire where it came from
But it is there,
Nonetheless. 

Maybe I spent a day
In reflections of the draining sun
Through billions of grains of dust
And salt. 
Oceanside; orbicularis 
Contracting. 

Or at an outdoor funeral
Of a wedding
I had no business objecting

Do I look burned?

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8lm5bd/comment/dzgr1t2?st=JHJKUSWP&sh=f9172932

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Posted May 23, 2018, 8:47 PM UTC · edited

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