[1707] The Retriever

[3288] My Critique - https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/8msxyb/3288_fantasy_chapter_4_of_evaraven_tvot/

[1707] My story - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AQqiT9GgHUrY20IBqtPRGygN1f4_eIFP4x0wxRyuNS0

I tried to create a foreboding, intimidating, inescapable character here in the Retriever. The story as a whole is about him (he is he main character, this chapter serves as a “Mook Horror Show” in TVTropes talk).