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honey377

Want

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The willows will wilt like my insides.
I wallow in wanting wholeheartedly.
The what and the why long forgotten,
it's the when that will waste me entirely.

My soul withered - you're water,
My heart wilful - you're wings;
Wings that make wimps want to wander,
wander and waste with the wind.
       

      I hope you enjoy reading this and please give me any feedback you have!   Edit: I have no idea how to format. But I can rap yo.

Here are my comments, great poems, have a read: https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8mvvxi/succulent_carnivore/ https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8mri9s/ketamine_revelations/

Posted May 29, 2018, 1:14 PM UTC · edited

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