Repheix - Strange and definitely need feedback

broken down, left discard,

covered in this pen and scars,

the writing on the wall in mind

 

I made it the same you see?

It's here to remind me of what I need to be.

of how I'm supposed to see this world,

of how I'm supposed to cough and hurl.

 

I almost killed myself, an idiots death.

 

Disgusting.

 

no more I say, no more of this shit.

I'll hold you, with a gun to your head,

oh you want that don't you, no, just a knife instead,

fear me, fear it, because I will not let you settle,

better the pain now, than the death there, so yes, it's my right to meddle.

 

She taught us this, this split, its here,

she taught you that sometimes, its better with fear,

the great way to prod, the stick when the carrot fails, or a fist to that brick,

whatever spurs you to the trail. Whatever must be done. Burn it all and start again. Well, the burning has already been done. A shimmering light, and pain all around you. Hate you. Hate her. Hate the world. But this is how you found you.

The flame, its lit, and it's damn better than your worthless depression shit.

So recognize it now, because I'm not letting it go out. It's going to burn and burn, nomatter your screams or shouts.

 

So take aim.

We know this game.

And armed with her truth, that sometimes we need lies.

And right now, I would be damn happy if she dies.

 

A fucking parasite. Cut free.

Now, go be who you're supposed to be.

 

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This could be great or terrible I have no idea with something like this. It's out there though.

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