[865]Superhero Story Prologue

Recent Critiques: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/8o67d9/1045_the_attraction/

I've been toying with the idea to make a superhero story for a long time. I am open to any improvements I could do to make my story better, but am mostly wondering if you enjoyed It. This prologue introduces one of the main antagonists of my story, and i would appreciate some feedback on it.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W2whFHGHH1S6GvLMB3c64Hh_EffGN7mK7Jjoc6z0Fsg/edit?usp=sharing