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Drowning

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I'm drowning

Drowning in a bottle that I don't even fit in

Yet my mouth is stuck to the opening like I'm breathing for air

That the very next sip determines my survival

Each gulp, oxygen to my lungs

Every ounce of alcohol, fuel to my reality

Afraid to face this world sober

Too scary a place to face for real

I'd rather live in my dreams

This is my biggest weakness

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8pyxp1/youre_beautiful/?st=JI8NDRLP&sh=1e51ea12

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8ookh9/for_her/?st=JI8NFGTH&sh=e55e9baf

Posted Jun 5, 2018, 8:10 AM UTC · edited

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