[my morning routines]

Feedback Received!

i’m half naked

and putting on pants that are too cold

i’m half naked

and covered in skin the shade of gold

.

is this too bold

or am i too old

to put on this shirt

with the sleeves all rolled?

.

does it matter

what i am told?

i in my hair

lay marigolds

.

.

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((edited with woodbars’s and depersonalizedpoetry’s feedbacks, thank you!!)) https://oc.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8ote6i/one_hp/ https://oc.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8ojivt/excerpt_broadway/

Posted Jun 6, 2018, 12:18 AM UTC · edited

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