Thanks for the advice! always helpful to have constructive criticism.
i'm using this channel as an excuse to learn video editing, so I spent the vast vast majority of the time working on this video on editing and like 15-30 minutes on the jokes, should probably have more focus on the script before I start the editing.
Normalize your audio better. Also not super funny. You have something with the format. But you need to improve the joke writing and your inunciation.
Thanks for the advice! always helpful to have constructive criticism. i'm using this channel as an excuse to learn video editing, so I spent the vast vast majority of the time working on this video on editing and like 15-30 minutes on the jokes, should probably have more focus on the script before I start the editing.
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