Touch me, touch me not

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A touch-me-not amidst a field of sunflowers,

He caressed her, gently, marveling as she furled her whispering leaves.

Her graceful shyness, emeralds against the blazing yellow--

His eyes, unable to drink all of her at once;

He lay in that field of sunflowers,

With such a longing to touch

those pretty little leaves,

once more.

(1) https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8nq57z/pocket_watch/e0czmia/?context=3&utm_content=context&utm_medium=user&utm_source=reddit&utm_name=frontpage

(2) https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8p7yb5/memorabilia/e0cz53e/?context=3&utm_content=context&utm_medium=user&utm_source=reddit&utm_name=frontpage

Posted Jun 9, 2018, 1:32 AM UTC

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