Pre-Conception

Code defines dominion as point does space.
A sensible suit gives social support.
Centrality our crushed reality
Show a force such helps us reshape the star.

I happily and freely give you waste,
From the Grandest Zeus of Samaria.
Grander than the gender bending fruit
That offers you a confident noble tree.

We'll wait, bated breath, for fearsome Sky Jew,
Wilfully wasting this glimpsed sacred Word.
Many come bluntly, they ask for Mercy,
But few, Israel, give kindness to you.

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This is a small excerpt, but it's rather long so the rest is here:

https://www.reddit.com/r/wirenpoems/comments/8taxl0/protection_introduction_book_zero_preconception/

I should probably explain. This is the introduction to an epic poem I am writing about the Virgin Mary called 'Protection'. It's, at first, a call to the Muses and then an introduction to what my brain picks up on its universal transistor. The actual story starts in the next Part (Part One) I just need to edit that and then I can put it up.

I will admit that I actually put a bit of work into this, not too much, but enough for me. I'm nervous to find out that it's a pile of manure and I'm an absolute hack, but never mind.

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