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breenogg

To Sleep, To Dream

Feedback Received!

So, I thought I'd try my hand at free verse...hope you like it!

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The night comes to me in fitful quiet.

The screeching day finally relents.

A memory, a thought? I can't tell the difference.

But the bliss of sleep is not far away.

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Oh what sleep I have earned.

My toils compounded on weary shoulders

Am I sinking? Or floating about?

Sensation finally gives way to absence.

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I hear voices, but not the words.

My sight has been stolen from me.

The weight, it's finally gone.

My hunched form stands upright.

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Is this what it's like to sleep at last?

If I'd known, I'd have gone to bed sooner.

One more round of voices, then silence.

Finally it's time to dream...forever.

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https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8slxjz/shunya/

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8skqww/parted/

Posted Jun 24, 2018, 5:32 AM UTC

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