[1740] Good Boy

Got a new short story I've been working on and figured it was time to give it the RDR treatment.

All comments and suggestions are welcome.

As always, if you stopped reading this story, could you tell me where you stopped and why? Otherwise, I'm looking for overall thoughts on the story (line edits are always welcome).

Thank you!

Link to story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1S22TbWeGyQeZWepu_Y5J0AQiZ84GRi3rp0r2CLUfkRA/edit?usp=sharing

Last Critique: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/8tmbv2/2898_wallaballoo_galapagos_jones_a_beatnik/e19jv02/