Mother

I have become you

Your putrid words spill from my lips

And now she cries;

I am meant to protect her

But now her heart

Lies broken on the floor

She has become me

This could have been prevented.

I shouldn't have become you,

But I did.

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Edit: removed needlessly complicated vocabulary. Lines 9 and 10 have been revised as suggested. Employed conservative use of punctuation for lines 3, 8, 9, 10.