Don’t look up

Feedback Received!

Don’t look up

Not too quickly

(You’ll get dizzy)

Steady keep

Not all things

Freely given

Are not filled

With hidden strings

Every home

With a loan

Has you sleeping

With a bank

So, don’t look up

Not too quickly

The air is thinner

Than you think

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