Rust

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I'm seven.

My face is plastered to the window
in the back seat of the old Bronco
and I'm watching trees blur past like watercolors.
The chassis rocks from side to side
and I imagine that this is what a boat must feel like.

The water here is too shallow
but the river bank is sandy
and I could almost cast my fishing line across to the other side.
Papaw warned me not to waste a good hook
caught on something under the murky water.

There's a power line in the front yard now
if you ever happen to stop by
and if you look hard enough, you can see
the thin clear cord wound around like a spool of thread.
Rusted hook swings in the wind.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/8ygm2g/as_her_love_grows_so_does_his_distance/e2bp95f/
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Posted Jul 13, 2018, 4:16 PM UTC · edited

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