[1121] My Boy (Short story on drug abuse/inner demons).

First time posting on here so not really sure what to expect. Haven't had my writing critiqued since high school, so just over a year, and I'm really hoping to find out how much my writing has developed, if at all. So critique away I guess.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uk9Jo0Bnh9jXSfbRuIHUqU0y-A9dQzdM6TF1iSK6WrM/edit?usp=sharing

My critique: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/8wknhp/1130_departure/