[870] CH1 of The Stolen Flame
Submission:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dGFZESmBQlfkgh8t0hKUawAF5wBNUsLLwDVQqx-6ZRc/edit?usp=sharing
Previous Critique:
https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/8zeq5t/1423_varics_landing_chapter_1_version_6/
Posted Jul 17, 2018, 3:35 AM UTC
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