Bright Night

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The sun is to set

To give way for anew

Night and day, a stellar duet

Hues of black, purple, and blue

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The cratered crescent rises

Of untapped splendor

The cloud then apologizes

And reveals an astral blender

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Cosmos of all shapes and sizes

Unconcerned with blue sky

With many bizzare surprises

It’s wonder, we can’t deny

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Beyond our world

The sea of color arises

The Milky Way with arms curled

It’s beauty, the sun despises

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But both entangled in celestial flesh

Soon the night will roar

For now, to beam afresh

The sun is to soar

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Posted Jul 17, 2018, 4:08 AM UTC

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