Never Child [just sharing]

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Posted Jul 22, 2018, 12:53 AM UTC · edited

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spitwitandwater•

“Never child” is a very poignant phrase for a lost/terminates child. This was a moving piece, only distracted by a few typos. Double check your editing, but strong emotions.

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Square29BOP•

I’m sorry if the format is wrong. I don’t normally do this. I just wanted to share.

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dogtim•

Your poem has been removed from OCPoetry because of Rule 2:

You did not include two links to recent high effort feedback. Click here to find some poems awaiting feedback. Here is a guide on what we require from feedback. You can message us here after editing your post, and we can re-approve it. Otherwise you may post your poem in a Sharethread.

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