This is possibly the best feedback I have received and most indepth, thank you very much! 

I will change the lexis 'piece' to 'pieces', having read it out loud it makes more sense.

I used the word close as each final word of each quatrain rhymes.

Not going to lie it wasn't overly intentional, I was developing this thought and going over it, talking to the subject... 'You' and thinking about it. It got to 3am and I just blitzed this out in 15 mins and in hindsight I should have read it over a few more times and out loud. 

Thanks again for the feedback and I will take what you said above, especially the incorrect plurals on board.

>Hundreds of piece of You.

I think you intentionally said :"piece" instead of making it plural but I don't think it really added anything.  I like that you capitalized You.  It made it seem like you were putting this person on a pedestal.

>How has such a jigsaw come to be.

Should this be a question?  If so question mark not period.



>I examine each piece, close.

I think "closely" instead of close because it would both make more sense grammatically and have the added benefit if rhyming with "be" unless you were specifically trying to avoid the rhyme there.

>A faint images, You, arose from clinging shadows.
I really think it was intentional that you said "a faint images" plural even though it should be singular but I again don't think it worked.  Though I can see how the theme of out of many pieces one could be your thought.  Maybe keep it or don't. Just examine your intentions.


>Individual pieces, oh so broken form…someone

I wonder if you might consider capitalizing "someone" 

Spread out in-front of me,

Hundreds of piece of You.

How has such a jigsaw come to be.

I examine each piece, close.

/

Upon hours of musing… an image forms,

Vaguely at first, but familiar in a sense.

Deliberating over our progress, thoughts come in swarms.

A faint images, You, arose from clinging shadows.

/

Months begin to pass, is our work complete?

Tangled pieces, delicately unwound.

Each to all others… too discrete,

A beautiful piece of art we compose.

/

Individual pieces, oh so broken form… someone.

You, return the favour; not to be outdone.

/

\- J.P.C

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