Tiger love
Heaving muscles,
he prowls,
raw magnificence, glamour-
a tiger in the wild.
He growls,
with heat in his eyes
yet a gentle smile on his lips
and I blossom inside-
a flame,
small but burning strong
new passion-
roaring to be sung.
Any feedback appreciated- not sure about the structure. Think the imagery could be portrayed more powerfully but I wanted to keep it simple. Thanks!
EDIT:
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/90b7s6/the_clinic/
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/90tokc/play_layla/
Posted Jul 22, 2018, 7:51 PM UTC
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