Tiger love

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Heaving muscles,

he prowls,

raw magnificence, glamour-

a tiger in the wild.

He growls,

with heat in his eyes

yet a gentle smile on his lips

and I blossom inside-

a flame,

small but burning strong

new passion-

roaring to be sung.

Any feedback appreciated- not sure about the structure. Think the imagery could be portrayed more powerfully but I wanted to keep it simple. Thanks!

EDIT:

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/90b7s6/the_clinic/

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/90tokc/play_layla/

Posted Jul 22, 2018, 7:51 PM UTC

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