The Reason We Forgot October

Wow, this is a very interesting poem. Lots of clever personification, and despite the fact that the Seasons/Months theme is practically beaten to death, you managed to breath new life into the subject. The only criticism I can give you is that your words are very simple, but the simplicity kinda helps the rather simple itself theme. Good work, keep on doing what you’re doing.

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