Black Embrace

Hello there everyone, I am back with a new creation of mine, not feeling very proud of it, but it was the only thing I could complete in one go once again. I took the advice to give the conclusion on the end more clearly, hopefully, it would help, tho adding another stanza might have been an overkill at the end.

                          Black Embrace

                   It was hard, hard to convey
                   What feelings towards you,
                   might do to me.

                   They could have torn me,
                   Torn me apart limb by limb,
                   Take my sanity, take it all.

                   For if it wasn’t for you,
                   I might have blackened out,
                   I might have taken it all away.

                   What happened instead,
                   Were you, helping me grow,
                   Grow to foresee,
                   A black veil awaiting me. 

Feedback: 1.https://old.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/931kkn/things_i_know/e3arbky/?utm_content=permalink&utm_medium=api&utm_source=reddit&utm_name=OCPoetry 2.https://old.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/92bmb7/confessions_of_a_bipolar_poet/e35i0t7/?context=0