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Free forming thoughts of wild. How you deceive my natural perception. How can it be that you lie to who is but your master? I own you. You are but a slave. But yet I seem to be the one in chains. Shackled from the neck down. "Do I see friends of caring and comfort"? No, it is but a mirage. Or so the chain that pulled me says. "But I had a bountiful life"? No, you were pitied and lied to. You never accomplished anything. "But I at least have someone that loves me, right? No, that is a soul who denies the truth. Perhaps like you do. "Then I shall break free of these chains." No, I shall release you soon. You will be free for a while. But I do this not for pity. But just to see the horror on your face when I come back for you. The thrill of the hunt. So invigorating. You enjoy it don't you? The feeling of escape from the dark and torture. And then being dragged back like an animal whose overstayed his welcome. How naive you must be. To think your a prisoner. You asked me to do this. Do you not remember?

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I'm sorry that these links are mobile links. I don't ever link stuff and don't have access to a computer at the moment. But I just really wanted to post this.

Posted Aug 5, 2018, 7:16 PM UTC

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