Let Me In So I Can See

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Her emotions drowned away by the end of the bottle

The blaring of the music is her acoustic coddle

Why is she running?

Where is she running to?

Aren’t I enough for you?

//

For you to forget the pain

That you numb away

When your jaw is done for the day

//

I love you, Mom

Can you hear that?

What can I do to bring you back?

Who are those inner demons?

Were you beaten, stopped from dreamin’, some other reason?

//

Let me in so I can see

What is the pain you wish to free

From which you run so desperately

So I can be there for you and you for me

So you no longer hurt me

And we can finally BOTH be free

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