Brief Hostel Encounter I

Feedback Received!

A smile, a 'hey'

A clean hand shake

Basic information exchanged

You were here to fight for a life

I was here to party and play

We are lone travellers on our own way

Ended up in this overheated hell of a place.

//

Interviews, job hunt

Just graduated?

Congrats, have fun!

You were a bit up tight about your work

I offered you my banters and my quirk.

We indulged ourselves in such an interaction.

Sparks flowing in this coastal tranquil heaven.

//

Get up, go out

Bicycle riding

along the beach how about?

You thought it was too much of a quest

I left you alone for the chase of sunset

We met again as strangers in the darkness and silence

Except your snoring in this room filled with a mess.

//

(For whoever bothered to read and crit, many thanks for your time)

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