[494] Forgotten Crimes

I wrote this short as a test run for a long going idea I've been thinking of working on. Nothing bar this and some world building has actually been done.

I'm looking for general feedback and whether or not the story can stand on it's own. Hopefully, you enjoy it.

Link to short: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f1wqtsn883EIR8_qqMxdz_P05zHPx9Obk9ZCKmD3pMg/edit?usp=sharing

Link to the previous critique: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/95faus/415_quiet/