The first poem I’ve ever written. Hate.

You redefined hate

You showed me what hate was

I hate you.

Your actions ruined lives

 

It consumes me

Those 4 letters hold so much power

I hate you.

Your actions ruined lives

 

I spend hour after hour thinking about it

Thinking about you and what you did

I hate you.

Your actions ruined lives

 

Every second is a second you don’t deserve

I can’t describe how disgusting you are

I hate you.

Your actions ruined lives

 

You redefined hate

You showed me what hate was

I hate you.

Your actions ruined lives close to mine

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