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My mother knows nothing of my poetry.

I don't think that she'd understand.

I know all she wants for me is sanity.

But for me, I'm afraid I'll be banned.

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For her when I'm writing I'm stuck in my mind.

I can't turn it off, you see?

But to ban me forever just wouldn't be kind.

'Cause when I am writing I'm free!

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So if she does see this I hope she will see,

although she may still not approve,

that poetry’s deep in my heart happily

and all I can do is improve.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/96kafh/comment/e4142lv

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/96itf7/comment/e40t5dk

Posted Aug 11, 2018, 11:45 PM UTC · edited

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